A kiss is just a kiss
So why do I feel like time unravels
Into pastel hues whenever I see you
The way your tongue dissolves
Like pink sugar crystals when they travel past my lips
How I lose myself in the simple sweet spun confection of your arms
The way the corners of your mouth curl into a smile
Sets my heart spinning like a top
Whose turbulence won’t cease
Knowing that eternity is the space between your lips
And my unwavering need for them♥
XOXO,
Britt
Inspirations for this poem – the movie Inception and this song that I used to listen to over a decade ago. I’m not sure who made the original .gif for this top from the movie because I’ve seen them on different sites, but I got this one off of tumblr.
You will feel you’re blown apart,
all the pieces there will fit
To make you whole and I know where they go 😉
I love this song – it’s got a great rhythm! 🙂 Almost sounds like something from the 70’s at times, kind of Reggae, but not really! Surprises your brain, I like things that surprise the brain – keeps me awake!! 🙂
The spinning top and the bit in pink, are they your words or a quote from somewhere – got a little confused now! 😕 Anyway – whichever it is it’s really good!!
If you want to leave links to an original gif there are quite a lot on Deviantart, could keep you busy a while looking at those! 😀
Lol, sorry for the confusion. My words but the spinning top isn’t mine. FYI – I’m learning to respond to this via my phone. How cool is that? ^_^ Hopefully it posts properly…
Very cool! Very handy too! My phone is too basic for that, but I don’t use it that much, will probably move on to something more snazzy sometime soon! 🙂
I had a strong feeling they were your words, but I know you often put other writing in a grey box, so just wondered! I thought the words were really good and they go so well with that tiny spinning top! 😀
You know my writing well, and you are correct. I normally do that but not today! Haha.
I’m slowly catching up to technology, but replying is a bit harder than I thought it would be.
Thank you Suzy. ❤
P.S. I edited the post so hopefully this helps 😀
hot song :). and it reminds me of the 90s cuz that’s when it was first released.
Yea it is 😀 The song popped up in my head in this morning. Hopefully it doesn’t stay there all day >_<
LOL! Reminds me of the 90's too.
haha. glad it did because look what it caused, you and it caused me to be transported back to past memories 🙂 where can i share my music with you?…in these comments or…
Musical transportation device FTW ^_^
Some people leave them in my comments or by email: msxindependent@yahoo.com
Looking forward to hearing the songs you select 😉
😀 ok, i’ll use one of those mediums to share them :-*
You have a great blog–I always enjoy your posts. I’ve nominated you for the Very Inspiring Blogger Award–2013. Please click here for more info! http://eyedancers.wordpress.com/2013/02/22/the-very-inspiring-blogger-award-2013/. It looks like you’ve already been nominated for his award–but I wanted to nominate you again. Keep up the great work!–Mike
Aww Mike >_< I am honored, thank you. ♥
Yes I have, but I don't mind the reminder that people are supporting me on this project and are actually accepting and reading it, this has been a humbling experience so far and it's not even the end of the year yet! ^_^
eternity is the space between your lips
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an ocean
that line
so hauntingly beautiful
Thank you for your kind words, always.
one of your loveliest yet.
Thank you 🙂
Terrific poem! Thank you.
Thank YOU for reading ♥
I like the poem, especially, the last two lines…
Thanks hun ^_^
Beautiful poem. 🙂
Thank you 😀
Goodness, what a great song that was..there is something in the rhythm of some songs where I think the writer must think – that’s it, I’ve got it! Or maybe not. And Suzy word muser, well I better follow her, because she always says things I want to say, only better than I say them….does that mean I am following anyway…well in a way.
Anyway, it is a lovely song, well fitted to your poem, which as everyone has already said is neat – in fact with that opening line (citing a song, from really olden times – a kiss is just a kiss….I cannot remember the rest of it, As time goes by I think. Whatever, anyway, to launch with such a line, you then take it to that delicate line that Geosans points out – eternity the space between your lips….thanks as ever, love your blog as does everyone else here, dear Britt!
Yay! I’m glad you liked the song J, and thank you ^_^
Even when I do not like some songs front up, sometimes you leave me with ways into them….I think sometimes it is the way we encounter some music that pulls us in – or puts us off, and you have brought me some interesting new music – still love the sound of Jonna Lee and her Whoami band….
Same goes for you 😀
I like how we can share music like this and pull one another into something we would not have listened to before. Ah yes, Jonna Lee is wonderful.