When the battle scars start fading
Stitch armor vests around your heart
When bullet cases fall from firing
You’ll turn your pain into an art
You had the blueprints to my body
Mapped your feet all over the chart
You had the key to the secret garden
Now you’re locked out from that part
Time to take this silly rough draft
Full of holes from cupid’s darts
Time to create a better prototype
Give myself a fresh new start
Raising ink from the blank pages
Uninhibited, yet still on mark
Raising the voice from my own phoenix
That had laid dormant in the dark
♥
Nice image to go with that poem…charting the heart!
Thank you John ^_^
Dang woman…this gave me chills! Yeah, to the New Blueprint. You deserve only the best, Brit. Since I haven’t been here in awhile I’m probably behind the times, but I love the new header 🙂 You are the Phoenix!
New header is recent, so you’re not missing out on my twin. I’m creating the New Blueprint as we speak. ♥
A powerful poem, I felt the pain. Thank you so much for dropping by wePoets. We would be honoured to showcase your work should you want to share. I see my partner in crime, Kira has already been here. 🙂
Thank you so much. Kira definitely brought me there, her spirit is so beautiful and I’d feel honored to share any future work on wePoets, when the chance permits.
You’re welcome. Kira does have a beautiful spirit, I’m honoured to be working with her. We look forward to what you send us!!
Sometimes is good to start again. Wonderful poem.
Sometimes a new start is all we need, my dear Leo.
That’s a beautiful combination of imagery – I like the way you weave violence, love and the diagrams we make (maps and blueprints) together. Lovely.
Aww, thank you S.L. Life isn’t always straightforward, we have to pave our own paths or change the roads we have traveled. Map them into they way we want them to be.
Yes and blueprints are all well and good but often there’s an important piece missing that makes the blueprint make no sense. 🙂
Blueprints are the like the bone and structure. Whatever else comes into the design or lack thereof will be small obstacles in the grande scheme of things. Or that’s what I’m willing to believe. 😉
Yes. the blueprint doesn’t take account of the meat of life. 🙂
And with meat comes flavour and meaning. 🙂
Such a beautiful way to illustrate the thoughts….!!
The imagery of a life encompasses your poem…Life, battle, love, violence, hope…..oh such thoughtfulness….!!
Depiction of a thoughtful post modern mind…!! GREAT
Thank you Kazi. xx
empowering …
Thank you ^_^
“You had the blueprints to my body
Mapped your feet all over the chart
You had the key to the secret garden
Now you’re locked out from that part”
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The beauty of the photograph almost overpowers the poem.
That day was surreal, and the photograph inspired the words.
Feeling the pain as I read this powerful poem. You are amazing and extremely gifted in your writings! You always capture my attention!
Awwww, thank you! ♥
Just noticed your latin inscriptions…..praying that the healthy mind is in a healthy body; the other one….hmm… Virtue undergone for a tranquilil life. Or something. Sounds elegant the last one which is why I probably have it upside down, but it sounds like one of the stoics….. virtue bringing its own peace and all that….
Of all the things I want now, is just to be happy and healthy. And the only way to acquire that is through virtue, which I hope will bring peace.
Saint Britt…mind you I think some of us see you that way already!
You are too kind, my dear John. ♥
You can tell…I am waiting for another post Britt….from you that is.
LOL! The next post will be short. I’ve been in the kitchen all night washing vegetables, I almost forgot to work on one! >_<
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Oh – I like this one, especially the way it ends – so positive! 🙂
And finding the key to someone’s heart isn’t difficult, but keeping hold of it seems to be the impossible task, for some anyway! 😦
Yes, keeping the key is the most difficult part for sure.
Amazing!
Thank you ♥
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