In some pictures you’ll see
The heart blistered with scars
Words branded on parchment
Inked into skin like memoirs
Growing much like a rose
Delicate but guarded
To attempt a touch
Is not for the fainthearted
You may think you know me
Yet I’ll have the final say
But how far can one truly get
Before the thorns get in the way
Bleed out as you keep trying
As you hold me close in vain
Until the light gives way between us
Letting only the darkness remain
♥
She’ll let you come just far enough
So you know she’s really there
Then she’ll look at you and smile
And her eyes will sayShe’s got a secret garden
Where everything you want
Where everything you need
Will always stay, a million miles away
Photo Credit: hiritai
“You may think you know me
Yet I’ll have the final say”…
I love this. It says so much about how I’m feeling now.
I’m glad you can relate. BTW, love your spoken word pieces, should be giving that a go as well – someday hopefully soon.
You SHOULD.
There is a book called the secret garden…not sure i love this song, but Bruce has sung a lot in his time….curious with your last line…the darkness and misunderstanding remains…..
I have yet to read the book. I used to listen to this years ago, not for the song itself but for the lyrics. As for the last line, the darkness and misunderstanding will always remain John. ^_^
Very lovely, and subtle rhyming made it soft.
Thank you Songbird ♥
I am always intrigued by your words and talent… You are an amazing poet of life 🙂
You are too kind >_<
Loved your poem, love the song (even though the guy misspelled Springsteen), love you. ~hugs~
LOL! I just noticed that after you pointed it out. Love you too *hugs*
You’re so talented, it should be illegal.
Aww, thank you Lisa.
I’m not blowing smoke up your ass either, it’s simple fact.
That is why I appreciate your words – you were never one to mince them or speak unless it was the truth.
Very few people pick up on that, I’m glad you get it. =)
Where do you come up with such beautiful posts girl? Wow. xxx
Perhaps from fatigue as of late 😦 Thank you MB xx
Loved the same lines many have pointed out, so I will just say nicely done.
Thank you Michael.
There is always that piece of mystery that one keeps to themselves, and it seems if I am allowed to see it, or experience its ‘wrath’ then my life is ever-changed. Thanks for the intriguing words.
Yes, every person has their secrets or mysteries about them; something private that only a few are given permission to divulge in. Once the gates are unlocked and one is allowed passage, it changes things. Thank you for your thoughts.
Interesting words! And I think I’d be a little scratchy right now, if I was to get involved in a relationship, I think I’ve trust issues hanging around me.:sad: I can be quite scratchy at my worst! After reading your poem, I’m just imagining the a man I might meet, bleeding trying to hold on to me! Not a nice image – but probably an honest one. I’m guessing you might be feeling similar? Just thinking: Is this a rewrite of your flower poem you mentioned, or is it another?
Those dolls are fascinating! I did find the one the other day a bit spooky, but the dark haired one is lovely – very grown up dolls! 😀
It’s based partially on one of my tattoos – I have the word ‘jaded’ written in Elvish Script on my back so no one can read or understand it but me (and perhaps a few nerds?). The other portion is based on a conversation I had on here with a fellow blogger about relationships; opening up and letting people get close.
I would definitely be scratchy if I were to get involved now, or ever. Things have happened in my life where I learned a lot about guarding myself and I can’t seem to shake off the thorns.
This is another, not a rewrite of the one I trashed 😀
They are very beautiful grown up dolls. So far I have five doll pictures – posts# 288, 282, 281, 280 and now 279. I’ve always been attracted and intrigued by them ^_^
“Words branded on parchment
Inked into skin like memoirs”
This conjures up a very strong visual of “The Illustrated Man” for me. It is bittersweet. Quite lovely as usual! 🙂
I wanted to let you know I’ve given you “The Very Inspiring Blogger Award” here: http://rachieadventures.wordpress.com/2013/03/28/the-very-inspiring-blogger-award-15-bloggers-7-facts-about-rachie/
🙂 May the sunshine bring you many smiles!
Very bittersweet, and describes the trail of tattoos I have.
Thank you Rachie for the nomination ♥
I hope you will share them with us sometime. 🙂
You’re quite welcome!
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“Bleed out as you keep trying” that’s my favorite line. This poem captures a relationship’s skeleton, and the gleam of its armor.
It is my favorite as well 🙂 As terrifying as that may sound.
Yes me too…came back for today’s feast….later maybe! We will bleed for you….anyday! lol
My computer and laptop just crapped out on me last night. Had to call my brother for technical support. I have a lot of catching up to do.
LOL! Thank you John ♥
Good luck….so stressful computer problems….
Such a good tune! ^_^
It sure is ^_^
I have to tell you. I went back and read my “know what you deserve” post and saw there were errors in it so I made some changes. Then I read your comment and they were ridiculously similar. I thought it was nifty 😉
Went back to read your correction, and that is nifty ^_^
great minds think _____ 😉
cookies?
I’m terrible at these fill in the blanks or mad libs 😉
Ha, doubt you are terrible at hardly anything. I think maybe you just want cookies 😉
So I’ve heard ^_^ hahaha. Juuuuust kidding.
And who doesn’t want cookies? Always got a pen in one hand, and the other stuck in the cookie jar 😛
They just don’t know you well enough, HA! 😉
Get your hand out of the cookie jar!! Bad poet.